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Friday, June 5, 2009

I'm working on a song...feedback?

Seasons they change
colors in may
but the beautiful girl stays the same
fades to gray
if she could talk
what would she say?
what would she say?

where did the light go
soft skin and glowing face
eyes turn to black
drying up and sinking in

if she could talk 
what would she say?
if you could listen, what would you do?
walk away, walk away

some think its selfish
she knows what might happen
working for a perfect world
but it doesn't change a thing

she knows you would listen
what would she say
what would you do?
she knows what will happen
but it doesn't change a thing

seasons they change
colors in may
but the beautiful girl stays the same
fades to gray

4 comments:

Tri Thin said...

it's lovely, wih I could hear it with the music!

Meggy said...

i like it, its reaaallly pretty. i like how not every single word rhymes, because thats way to sing songy. the lyrics seem like they came deep from the heart :] wonderful job darling, and youre beautiful as well :)

diente de león said...

i love your face and your arms!!!but i also like the song! :)

Matilda B. said...

beautiful lyrics!! :) cant wait to hear you sing it! :)